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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:19 pm 

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Story of ShiverBlade
Once on planet Crete a boy was born, his name...was Andrico Elmano. He was a normal boy who got a good graduation on school. He was a creative boy and allways very curious of things and had as bad character point that he allways wanted to take the best out of him. It sounds good, but he never stopped until it worked and it enoyed people. But after all those years people got used to it and Andrico started to less it greatly.
At the age of 18, he allready controlled his own ship. The nomad war just ended, and the battles between ASF and the CSF at crossfire started. Many clans formed and the Corsairs where busy very hard defending their own flacks in the nebula's against incomming Bounty Hunters, Nomads, and Outcasts. It were hard times, and Andrico was a very skilled fighter. Allot has happened in the 2 years and on the day of Andrico's 20th birthday he got as a bonus gift to lead a own special team of choice to the Unknown system to scout the situation. Andrico was pleased and very excited and setted up the team he wanted. And off he went, into the dark.

In the Unknown system, everything was quite. They scouted the entire system and nothing was to be found, abit too quite in Andrico's opinion. He scouted on while his team didn't approved but they had to follow him. They found a jumphole, they reported the location but for some reason all communication systems outside the system was broken suddently, Andrico had to enter. With no particulairy reason he had to enter. And so he did, and his team followed. It was there where they noticed huge building fleets of nomad battleships, gunboats, carriers, liches, and haunts..and also...another..big, ship..something they have never seen before! It was amazing but still frightening. Suddently they snapped out of it and tried to go back but the jumphole didn't work. For some reason they didnt got attacked. But they didn't attack either. It was that big ship, that big unknown ship..and they faded..

Wh-what is-.....thi-s...p-p-pla..ce.....Everything looked purple, and green..he didn't feel anything...but he wanted to escape...he was sitting in a big...thing...he couldn't out...then he saw...them...no, he didn't saw them..but he saw light..allot of..light..he heared in his mind: Sleep, much u have to learn us today.. and Andrico faded again.

*boom*An explosion, Andrico looked around and everything was in flames..then men in liberty suits appeared..and in ASF suits..Also Order. They took Andrico and his team away from there and brought them in the planes....Andrico woke up in a big room. He saw his team mates, or atleast...2 of them..in the room. Those 2 were one of Andrico's best friends. Andrico didn't remember his name..He didnt remember..anything..but then something flashed through his mind..Nomads..Gamma..Corsairs!..Andrico stood up, not an idea where he was or how to get out..Then the door opened. A man walked in, that man..that was the guy from..there..where i ..am..was?..Suddently the 2 friends of Andrico started to run! The man took his gun and shot them down 1 by 1. Andrico was shocked and pushed the man aside and ran!..On the way allot of things came up...Gamma, liberty, everything...he went into a silent spot and screamed it out..the pain..all those memories..next day..he stole a ship and flew to Gamma.

Once there, he was looking for the people who knew him. The strange thing was, no-one reconized him. They saw him as a stranger with a liberty ship. He tried to ID himself with scanners but scanners showed blank. He tried to warn people of a nomad invasion..but no one belived him. Then he saw a old man with rugged cloth...sitting there...it was clear to Andrico that he had no home and such like him. So he went sitting aside the man. The man said, it..it's you!..Andrico looked at him: Do..i know you? Well, no you dont know me said the man. But i deffinetly know you, but cause of my bad memory i cant remember your real name..i do know that they called you..ShiverBlade..and then again Andrico's memory flashed..Andrico was determined to learn everything of his failures..he never stopped until he won..he shivered his opponents of the fear he brought with his slight movements..like a blade he rended through everything cause he knew all tactics..they called him..The Shiverblade. Shiverblade and the man had a talk together..the man told Shiverblade that everyone who could possibly have known him has been killed. Nomads, said the man..Nomads infiltrated in many...maany ranks such as the ranks of the PX clan. The infiltrators in the PX clan made bounties for the people who knew Shiverblade and the entire clan went on it. A total-Massacre. But no one knew of it cause it looked like normal random bounties, while it wasnt for Shiverblade. Shiverblades contacts had to be annihilated according to the nomads..but the reason there for is still unknown. Shiverblade thanked the man, and started to go to the goverment. Shiverblade still remembered a secret entrance, and with it..he reached the high council. Shiverblade told them of the situation, if they didnt belive him they could look for their selves. And so it happened, they went and looked..and the scouts came back with reports of huge nomad ships. Everyone jumped into the battlestations and a huge attack was set in. Shiverblade helped out in a standaard ship. And the Gamma system has been defended..for now..the Corsairs thanked Shiverblade greatly, and shiverblade got a night to sleep in their hotels and got some clothes, money and the ship he was flying. They told Shiverblade that they should go to a GMG outpost in the Dervonon system where he can meet a man who can give Shiverblade the hideing he needs at this moment. And so Shiverblade went. But Shiverblades plans were interubted. An nomad infiltrator, gave a false report to the DC leadership that Shiverblade invaded their system. Inmidietly a huge bounty came on Shiverblades head and that drew attention of lots of PX...

In the Dervon system, Shiverblade allmost approached the base when PX of multiple sides came..Shiverblade tried to fight well..but his small ship wasnt matched against PX their highly advanced technology. So Shiverblades ship exploded, but the escape pod was picked up by the GMG base. According to the reccords, Shiverblade was finaly dead..But in truth, he was still there..recovering.
At the GMG base, the same man appeared. And explained Shiverblade the situation, why he killed his friends etc. They were infected by something..they got mad...but Shiverblade...he stayed stable and uneffected. This man, called him self Michael. Michael and Shiverblade had a great dinner, talked allot and were discussing plans..Shiverblade..wanted revange, and not only on the PX for murdering all his friends and family. He wanted to get rid of the nomad threat and what lies beyond. Michael offered Shiverblade a spot in the CFPD, LSF and ASF and all the money and equipment he asked for. Shiverblade agreed with a few certaint agreements what he would, and wouldnt do cause he stays a pirate of origin. And also, he wants his vengeance apon the people who attacked him, and his friends and family. Shiverblade was planning to have is revange on the people of his list first, before he would do anything other real big things. But in the meanwhile he would be an agent of the LSF as cover, and to help the scientists with things. He would help the CFPD with keeping the greater peace between people. While CFPD are cops, Shiverblade isnt one. Shiverblade only serves the CFPD if its about larger things. An pirate who isnt troubeling Shiverblade isnt of his concern. What is, is if an entire planet gets invaded by pirates. Shiverblade only cares for the greater good of things what he is doing. And that is also the reason he joined the ASF. To fight the CSF cause they want to break the idea of uniting the houses, and then in the end Shiverblade hopes to help in fighting the common enemy: The aliens of the outter realm.

Anything what should be changed guys? Or is it awesome enough? ^^

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Last edited by Shiverblade on Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:46 am 
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Awesome, but wrong.

The Dominator Kavashes are not enemy anymore (like in Freelancer original one, and Crossfire past version), if you'd have followed the multiplayer storyline.... you kill Ancients to be allyed with Dom Kavashes...

DKs only tested us a bit until now with FEW gunboats to see if we, the humans, are capable of helping them with the outer Galaxy aliens, Dominator Setek, Dom Razak, Don Nepesh, the Sentinels, the Savages... as the DK after controlling and dominating all our galaxy, they wanted to visit other galaxyes, and so they made up with their huge technology a portal using the dark matter of the black hole in teh center of our galaxy, a portal to other galaxyes, but they found out more savage aliens, warrios who don't stop at anything and just want to kill, some other aliens are traders, and others are just built up races to defend a dominator race, like how DKs did with the Nomads, as they created teh nomads to keep an eye on us ^^

So your story need a bit of fixing, the common danger are the outer aliens, DKs are the main defenders of this galaxy, they fight and oose planets defending us un a direct war with teh ouer aliens... while we're far away hidden in Sirius and Altair sectors :D


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:12 am 

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Allright...so..the outer aliens are the enemies...humans are the inner protectors of the galaxy....nomads of the outer galaxy and domkvash the rulers...but why are the nomads attacking us and wanting to kll us all in the first place? I mean..the testing is allready over i would think lol


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:58 am 
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No, dom kavashes are the protectors, we just visit their Inner Core sector, where they are fighting the out aliens :D Nomads are just builded up beings, and humans... some low lvl allyes, actually, we're existing now cus they abandoned some colonies to give place for natural races to grow up, (part from the story), so, we're also a kind of colony of them lols

The Nomads are made to kill everything on sight... so they still do it... if we are advanced enough, we survive them and continue our trips :D They are like a filter :D


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:45 pm 

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Ah ok, i will tell ya when the story is edited


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:53 pm 

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Well i only changed the domkvash to the aliens of the outer realm cause its possible that the domkvash captured us..why? Because they wanted to learn something of us. What unknown, but it isnt deadly nor do we remember it. But its allright now right? Swat-Portal postable?


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:15 am 
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Yep ^^


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